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Slain Man

Postby Jeffrum Thompson » Wed Dec 12, 2012 5:49 am

Slain Man

Scurrying around for nothing,
Lost in a world of pollution.
An overwhelming sense of longing,
Is there no solution?

Narcissistic world of many,
Malice towards our institution.
An inescapable trap for any,
Never giving resolution.
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Re: Slain Man

Postby Legalize It » Wed Dec 12, 2012 10:08 pm

This is clever, I really like it. Good job!
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Re: Slain Man

Postby NellDikson » Tue Feb 26, 2013 4:15 am

Why did the poet use "he" instead of "I" in the title?
Why did the poet switch pronouns throughout the poem: "We" in stanza 1 and "you" in stanza 5
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